Reflection Entry #40 May 28 ,2009

Today i got a little carried away and distracted and talekd my way through most of the lesson. This caused me to complete very little today. And I was unable to follow my plan I devloped in the previous reflection because of me getting distracted. I completed my essay, just need to complete the bibiliography. What i'm planning to do over the weekeneds is to finish the website bibliographies, then at school I can finish typing the bibliography from my note cards on sunday. What I did well today was I proofread my essay made changes and even asked some of my class amtes to read the essay and give me their feedback on how to improve my essay. Some of them said I had unneccary words, which helped me take down my word limit. They told me to stop using the word: "Ancient" again and again when referring to my civilization. Or they'd tell me to change the order I put information should be rearranged to make it more organised. Some even said that I had to improve my P.E.A. Which I did by going over the important sentences in the essay. I changed the structure and put in the Point, Evidence and the Analysis. I tried to put it in the important parts of the essay Once I did all these improvements, my essay looked pretty solid. I think the bibliography I'm going to make will need to be alphabetical and in the correct form because the bibliography is one of the important parts of the project. Since I don't have the links for all the sites I've been to, I'm going to try to find them at home, and get proper bibliographies for the websites, for the books I'll have to do them next lesson, because that's all I'll be doing, working on the bibliography. Also if I finish with my essay and bibliography, I'm going to find some pictures for the powerpoint presentation.